Crafting a Compelling First Sentence: Tips and Tricks for Writers

Many writers struggle with the daunting task of crafting the perfect opening sentence. But what if I told you that it's perfectly okay to write a first sentence after you've finished your draft? Yes, you heard that right. The opening sentence should reflect the essence of the piece, and sometimes, the best way to do that is to write the whole story first and then decide how it should begin.

Why Not Worry about the Opening Moments?

Writing a first sentence before completing your draft can be counterproductive. The opening moment is crucial, and without the full context of your story, crafting an opening that hooks your reader can be challenging. You might initially think your first chapter is the best fit, only to realize later that a different chapter or even a completely new chapter suits the narrative better. The first sentence is like finding the right keyhole; it needs the whole picture to fit perfectly.

When is the Best Time to Write a Killer Opening?

If you must, start by stealing from the masters. Look at other works and find an opening sentence that resonates with you. It could be a piece of dialogue, a description, a historical fact, or a quote. Here are a few examples:

“It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.” — Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen “Hale knew before he had been in Brighton three hours that they meant to murder him.” — Brighton Rock by Graham Greene “In the light of the moon a little egg lay on a leaf.” — The Very Hungry Caterpillar by Eric Carle

Steal one of these or find your own that strikes a chord. Not only will it reduce the pressure of creating something groundbreaking from the start, but it can also be a source of inspiration. Once you have your opening ready, dive into the rest of your writing without worrying about what follows. After you've completed your draft, you can then decide if your first sentence still suits the piece or if it needs to be revised.

Source Inspiration to Enhance Your Writing

Using another writer's opening as a starting point is a perfectly valid strategy. But, as you craft your masterpieces, remember: be authentic. Don’t just copy and paste the sentence you stole. Use it as a springboard. Develop your own style and voice, ensuring that the rest of your piece resonates with the opening you've chosen.

When to Nix the Plagiarized Line

Once you have your draft complete, it's time to face the reality of the borrowed opening line. Feel free to remove it and choose your own. The goal is to have an opening that truly encapsulates the essence of your story, rather than being a stolen one. Remember, the best first sentences are original, striking, and set the tone for the entire piece. A stolen first sentence can detract from the authenticity of your work. So, when you're ready, edit and revise until you find the perfect opening that sets your narrative aglow.